Nowadays people are influenced by fashion, in particular when choosing their clothes and hairstyle. Is this a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.
Fashion waves has been spreading rapidly. People often buy new dress or change their hair style as look like innovative fashion design or trends especially youth. In this statement, I think it is a positive development, because, people could flourish their own style as depends on ingenious trends, which may leads to confidence and conviction to face challenges and others.
People have the tendency to imitate some other super hero's or god father's. Every one has some kind of ambition to look good and to have had an esteemed position in others eyes. However, follow up trending hair style or film stars looks to copy in own life style exaggerate the actual reality. Make use of fashion trends may enhance the position in peer groups and in society to be unique in terms of pleasure. For example, novel film fashion style as copied to my college union on our fair well party to become viral in social media and that would be a fantastic remembrance of college days until the last breath of us. Moreover, a famous proverb in locally spread that, run at the middle when the nation run.
Personality become significantly measured by good looking and way of style in terms of hair style, branded things and so on. Many believes that, first impression is best impression, since, lot of people intend to follow fashion trends and changing styles. Owing to the fact that people often get self dependency and the courage to face others with confidence. For instance, one of my friend explain that the face to face interview with delegates from foreign country got impressed with her by the way she put hair and dress code with innovative changes.
To conclude, experience different style would be indispensable in modern world. By the virtue of following variety of fashion would alter our life style in various horizon and that may give us positive attitude towards different stages of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, i think, kind of, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88819875776 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48900983112 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605590062112 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2569050902 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.933333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123750502574 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411235445993 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0279775408075 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0790329416507 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353141263785 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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