The given tabular graph highlights the information about the three different medals- gold, silver, and bronze won by top ten nations during the London Olympic games which was held in 2012. The rank was determined by the number of achieved gold medals which is clearly and coherently representated.
It can be seen that United states was ranked first who 46 gold medals, 29 silver medals, and 29 bronze medals (104 total medals) whereas China ranked second having 88 total medals: 38(gold), 27(silver), and 23(bronze). In addition to this, Great Britain had 29 gold medals and Russia had 24, but in case of bronze and silver medals, Russia was superior, having more number of medals than Great Britain. Furthermore, South Korea had 13 gold, 8 silver, and 7 bronze medals respectively.
As far as trend was concerned, Germany and France had equal number of gold medals but Germany got sixth rank having 44 total number of medals and France was at seventh position having 34 total medals. Apart from all that, Italy, Hungary, and Australia were ranked eighth, ninth, and tenth respectively.
Overall, it is evident that US is top first country getting highest number of gold medals whereas Australia is at number tenth getting least number of gold medals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'getting the highest'.
Suggestion: getting the highest
...is evident that US is top first country getting highest number of gold medals whereas Australia...
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Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'getting the least'.
Suggestion: getting the least
...ls whereas Australia is at number tenth getting least number of gold medals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, second, so, whereas, apart from, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1045.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38948154052 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564593301435 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.482926829268 1449% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8821661189 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.625 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.125 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 5.23603664747 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148036775271 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752134191091 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617086291452 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113652498252 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547942470909 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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