In many cities today, most people live in large apartment blocks. Does this kind of accommodation have more advantages or disadvantages?
Public’s lifestyle has undergone a huge alteration in the last few decades, and their housing is not an exclusion. These days, the majority of individuals are living in apartment complexes; albeit, the opinions on this issue vary widely, and both positive and negative arguments can be made which will be discussed in detail in this essay.
One the one hand, there is no denying that there are numeral merits associated with living in houses rather than apartments. First and foremost, the most imperative benefit obtained from having such lifestyle might be the unfettered access given to people preferring living in private residences, ranging from the ability to have a swimming pool in the yard to being unconstrained to hold lively parties. Moreover, living in a house can occupy a leading role in developing children’s physical skills. It can easily be illustrated by making a comparison between the children living in apartment blocks virtually captivated in their rooms with their peers whose house offer them the possibility to spend their leisure time having physical pursuits.
Being oblivious to potential pros related to accommodating in houses is truly short-sighted; however, we cannot be indifferent to the advantages of living in buildings. People have chosen to live in apartments usually subscribe to the idea that living in an apartment seems to be a way more safer option compared to living all alone. This argument makes sense since complexes often tend to be guarded by sorts of security forces. In addition, living in apartments might fulfil habitants dire need to having maintained their units due to the fact that the residents pay a certain amount of money on a monthly basis, so the odds are that a service company probably take care of any unprecedented predicament interwoven to their accommodation.
Taking all above-mentioned points into consideration, we can arrive at an inevitable conclusion that the advantages of living in an apartment can merely outweigh the possible disadvantages, as owing to the convenient lifestyle it tends to offer to its habitats.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 287, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'safer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: safer
...iving in an apartment seems to be a way more safer option compared to living all alone. Th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 31.9359605911 175% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 1207.87684729 148% => OK
No of words: 336.0 242.827586207 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30357142857 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 3.92707691288 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04773530284 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 139.433497537 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610119047619 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 379.143842365 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.5024630542 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.3763084696 50.4703680194 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.0 104.977214359 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5454545455 20.9669160288 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 7.25397266985 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207769241907 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775226826896 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596396303247 0.071462118173 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120390899986 0.151781067708 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533672571681 0.0609392437508 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 12.6369458128 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.9458128079 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 55.0591133005 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.3980295567 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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