You should spend about 20 minutes on this task
You should write at least 150 words
Write a letter for help because of the losing your bag which contains some important things in the Aero plane.
- describe the bag,
- explain what happened,
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter for seeking help to find my lost bag while traveling in one of your aircrafts. Last Sunday i.e. 13th September 2018, I travelled from New Delhi to Mumbai via Indigo flight departs at 8:00 am from New Delhi and I remember that travel bag was with me when I boarded the flight but when reached hotel in Mumbai, I realized that I lost somewhere while travelling.
This bag is travel bag used for keeping key items such as passport, currency, address etc. Bag is made of leather and of brown color. Besides, there is tag attached to the big chain which exhibit my photograph, name and address. I reminisce that my seat was at aisle side and following I settled, an old lady request me to change the seat on other side of aisle near to window. I immediately responded and agreed to exchange the seat. Since lots of other passengers were waiting to clear the passage for walking past, I rushed to other side without my bag, though my cabin bag was still in the box above my original seat.
Although no costly item, I kept in the bag, my childhood watch was in the bag which I generally keep with me as my lucky charm and I would not hesitate to say that I am missing watch a lot.
I request you to help me to find my bag as soon as possible. If there are any other queries, may be contacted at mobile number (7763800072). I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Lokha
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter for seeking hel...
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Line 6, column 18, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help me find' instead.
Suggestion: help me find
... missing watch a lot. I request you to help me to find my bag as soon as possible. If there ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, look, may, so, still, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1164.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 266.0 206.0 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37593984962 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37049676317 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593984962406 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.6240183179 44.8134815571 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5384615385 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165819933234 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678547919054 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514354271906 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104073082801 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219843757665 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.