final version.....154. In some countries, people are no longer allowed to smoke in many public places and office buildings. Do you think this is a good rule or a bad rule? Use specific reasons and details to support your position.
Human is a social creature and living within the society is one of the most important aspects of people's lives. Certainly, within a society people are not allowed to do everything. Public places and office buildings are such places in that everyone should respect to others. It seems to me that, taking some actions are not suitable in these places, Actions such smoking are in this category. Definitely, I am positive that, this rule is good one and prohibiting people from smoking is good decision. Because of several reasons, such as respecting to others right, making value to others health, an...
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Sentence: It seems to me that, taking some actions are not suitable in these places, Actions such smoking are in this category.
Description: The fragment Actions such smoking is rare
Suggestion: Actions such as smoking
Sentence: Definitely, I am positive that, this rule is good one and prohibiting people from smoking is good decision.
Description: The fragment is good one is rare
Suggestion: is a good one
Sentence: Because of several reasons, such as respecting to others right, making value to others health, and also bad effects of smoking among children.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: other's health
Sentence: If we carelessly smoke near childes, this behavior will become usual for them and maybe they try to smoke.
Error: childes Suggestion: children
Sentence: Thus, smoking near childes in public places is the worst action an adult can take.
Error: childes Suggestion: children
Sentence: Because it hurts people's right in society, in addition it is harmful for public health, and ultimately it makes bad effects on childes.
Error: childes Suggestion: children
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Score: 26 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
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No. of Words: 458 350
No. of Characters: 2128 1500
No. of Different Words: 214 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.626 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.646 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.327 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 49 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.357 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.013 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.295 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.462 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.123 0.07
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