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Fardiiiiiinnnn180.Movies are popular all over the world. Explain why movies are so popular. Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
One of the most important things in today's world is media. There are several types of media such as books, newspapers, internet, and television or cinema movies. Among these media, movies are definitely popular than others. Certainly, there are a variety of advantages in characteristics of movies which made movies popular among world’s people. It seems to me that, the most important properties that made movies ideal for people are entertaining, convenience, and also mass of advertising for movies attracts people to watching them.
The main reason for popularity of movies is entertaining. ...
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Sentence: Movies have lots of stories, maybe one day your life story become a movie.
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