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Fardiiiiiinnnn180.Movies are popular all over the world. Explain why movies are so popular. Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
One of the most important things in today's world is media. There are several types of media such as books, newspapers, internet, and television or cinema movies. Among these media, movies are definitely popular than others. Certainly, there are a variety of advantages in characteristics of movies which made movies popular among world’s people. It seems to me that, the most important properties that made movies ideal for people are entertaining, convenience, and also mass of advertising for movies attracts people to watching them.
The main reason for popularity of movies is entertaining. ...
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Sentence: Movies have lots of stories, maybe one day your life story become a movie.
Description: The fragment story become a is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace become with verb, past tense
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 30 15
No. of Words: 491 350
No. of Characters: 2381 1500
No. of Different Words: 230 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.707 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.849 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.657 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 178 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 118 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 73 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 52 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.367 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.139 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.311 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.469 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.154 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5