Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Change lifestyle and activities is a heated-up issue. Some people advocates that committing to same habits and regular activities is preferable to some people, while the opponents reject this notion, believing that it is more beneficial to experience a change. I partially agree with the first idea; however, I cannot deny the importance of keep making a change in people`s life. This essay will discuss, firstly, reasons of this preference for many people, and secondly, the good outcomes from experiencing new things, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
Regular activities might be accustomed by certain kinds of people. When they were practicing it for long time, it can not be stopped due to various reasons. In addition to being more comfortable while having their normal activities. For instance, old people prefer to read the news through the newspaper. There are many cutting-edge technologies for publishing the news around the world, but they cannot get familiar with these advanced gadgets, and they prefer their old ways to surfing the news through common newspapers.
On the other hand, when People are experiencing new things either challenges at their work or new habits in our lives, it broadens our mind by a significant understanding. It is also boosting our experiences and skills. Many people keep changing their companies and only spend few years at each company. It might reveal to unstable career; however, it leads to gaining different experience and various skills from the exposure to different systems. For example, businessmen started their business only after getting exposed to different career positions through their life. That makes them ready to open their own company base on their previous experience.
To conclude, change might be mandatory to kind of people, but it has its beneficial impacts on others. I would therefore address that it depends on each one requirement and needs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32352941176 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8106874051 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598039215686 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5774688611 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8235294118 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58823529412 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19884318584 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542794408849 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374756475235 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103579980418 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485246150094 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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