YOUTH IS wasted ON THE YOUNG
You do not know what you have, till you lose it. It is exactly the same about youth. We cannot truly realize that how much precious it is, till we get older and lose our youth. But do young people lose their youth without realizing how much precious it is? Do they really not know what precious thing they have? In my view, it is right. I am a young girl; but I believe I do not appreciate my youth as much as I have to. Here is two of my reasons why I think in this way.
First, young people take life too serious. It is not bad to think about everything seriously; but, thinking seriously about something does not mean we must put ourselves in pressure. One of these pressures which all young people are putting themselves under it is working. However, they must do their best in their job till they are young and energetic, but, nowadays young people are obsessed with their work. They spend most of their time in their work place and work really hard to gain more money and have this ability to have a more luxury life. But as they get older, they will realize that life is not just about money; there are so many things which are more important than money; somethings like, peace, being relax and having free time to spend with family. They are more important than money, why so, you cannot buy these things by money. And even if you work really hard, you just lose these important things more and more and get somethings which may not be that much important. When I was twenty, I was working ten hours a day and I did not have enough time to spend with my family, but when I became twenty-five, I just realized that family is more important than money, so I stopped working too hard and dedicated some of my time to my family.
Second, young people waste their time and health by playing video games. When I was teenager, I used to play video games almost five hours a day and I really hurt my eyes. I also failed in two of my courses and it was such a big shame for me. I had to wear glasses because my sight was ruined by playing too much video games and had to spend my whole vacation in summer classes to pass those failed courses. But just after the day I wore glasses and noticed I cannot enjoy my summer vacation like other students, I noticed how much precious was my sight and time, and it was the thing I realized after losing some important things. All young people do not know how much their time and health is important, and even if they see some people who has passed the same path which they are passing, still do not accept their advices and prefer to go all along the path and have their own experience. Which this experience may cost too much for them.
To cut the long story short, I all want to say is that, we must pay a close attention to all we have and appreciate them before we lose them. When we are young, we may think we never lose our youth and we will be in these precious ages for a long time. But, youth will pass like wind and we must appreciate it before we lose it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, really, second, so, still, i think, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 13.8261648746 210% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 103.0 43.0788530466 239% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2440.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 578.0 407.700716846 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2214532872 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90322654589 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05188560885 2.67179642975 77% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.410034602076 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 756.9 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1348748659 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3703703704 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4074074074 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.03703703704 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.85842293907 363% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15216476494 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570155261015 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796580218048 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984196633236 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500510301447 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 58.1214874552 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.2 10.9000537634 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.24 8.01818996416 78% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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