Effective learning requires time, comfort and peace so it is impossible to combine study and employment. Study and employment distract one from another. To what extent do you think the statements are realistic? Support your opinion with examples.
Comfort, time and peace are required for the effective learning. That’s why study and employment cannot be possible to do simultaneously and both occupation and education disturb each other. I strongly oppose to the notion because handling both education and employment together can be possible with strong will power. This essay will discuss my opinion in detail and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
To commence with, in western countries, there are a lot of people do part time study and full- time work or vice versa. It all depends on the preference of individual. If they want to bear some work load and become more productive in their life, they can manage both things side by side which eventually help them to become independent. For example, my cousin in USA, she did her part- MBA course with full-time job and grabbed a high-profile job in Microsoft which not only made her more knowledgeable but also more potential to tackle all things side by side.
To continue with, some parents cannot bear the expenses of children’s education and ask children to earn money for themselves and family. But it does not mean that children should abandon their dream of having proper education. It is possible with firm dedication and determination that can continue their education and work to feed their family as well. For instance, my friend used to work in a café to feed his family and to fulfil his dream to acquiring education because of his firm determination and dedication.
In conclusion, the forgoing discussion propounds the view that working and studying are very much possible together and it just depends on the dedication and determination of the person. People should do work and study side by side to make themselves more skilled and capable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...countries, there are a lot of people do part time study and full- time work or vice versa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 8.36945812808 275% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 5.75862068966 313% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 297.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01683501684 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80735402265 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 463.5 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1783956956 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.428571429 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129392640425 0.242375264174 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540691829115 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639796483868 0.071462118173 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843245150465 0.151781067708 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517155639976 0.0609392437508 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.