You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
Give details of your study plans
Explain why you want to get a part-time job
Suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Roar,
Hope this letter finds you in the best of health. it is always a pleasure to write to you as you are among those friends who always feels happy to give a brotherly advice in anyway. I am happy and charged to inform you that I got admission in one of the best university of Canada and that too in your city.
I will be joining university in mid next month for a 2 years degree program in digital marketing and entrepreneurship. This program will surely help me in this competitive market. All the dues have already been paid in this regard and I will fly in the first week of July to get settled before my classes start and to manage my accommodation provided by the university.
I was thinking to join a part time job during my course to meet my overhead expenses as I don’t want to put extra financial burden on my family in this regard. Along with this, I might get a chance to meet new people and socialize with them to know about other cultures.
As I will be a new face in your country, you can help me by putting my resume in your social circle or the people known to you so that I might get a job as early as possible. I have applied for a few jobs from online job portals as well and hoping to get a positive response. your support in this regard will be highly appreciated.
Yours Sincerely,
Zeeq
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 51, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...letter finds you in the best of health. it is always a pleasure to write to you as...
^^
Line 2, column 153, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'brotherly advice'.
Suggestion: brotherly advice
... friends who always feels happy to give a brotherly advice in anyway. I am happy and charged to in...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 172, Rule ID: IN_ANYWAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in any way'?
Suggestion: in any way
... feels happy to give a brotherly advice in anyway. I am happy and charged to inform you t...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 26, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...e university. I was thinking to join a part time job during my course to meet my overhea...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 276, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Your
... and hoping to get a positive response. your support in this regard will be highly a...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, first, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 254.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23622047244 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49166258084 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57874015748 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 347.4 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.7594212185 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6666666667 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.91666666667 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259191341045 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967604187505 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898503985689 0.0603063233224 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15236815689 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129112432826 0.0580467560999 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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