A government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, with more urbanization , is it fair that government to spend more on one mode of transport i.e railways than roads? that's a question worth to be debated in detail.
As mentioned above, with more urbanization, its better Government to concentrate on both mode of transports.now lets discuss people requirements on the mode of transport for the respective circumstances.
1.People who wants to travel long distance with limited budget.
2. People who wants to commute daily to their office for a long distance.
The above 2 circumstances are more suitable for railway travel,beside railways also can be utilized for transporting goods in mass volumes.
Now lets see the other requirements,
1. People want to commute to office for short distance.
2. People who prefer long distance travel for vacation in private as a family.
3. Goods or property transport which require little more secured with stops at various destinations.
The above requirements wins the debate for roads.
When you take each requirements, they have its own significance and its not fair Government to align on just one side especially on financial terms.Government has to hire a team,in analyzing the need of the hour, like doing a complete study on the current infrastructure of the country with respect to both modes of transport.
To conclude,once the report is generated by the analysis team, a leadership team should come up with a solid decision on where the infra is lacking and have to spend more money in there.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, as to, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16260162602 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11747725883 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605691056911 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.8455609879 50.4703680194 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6923076923 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 7.25397266985 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.12807881773 291% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.33497536946 244% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121062152846 0.242375264174 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373472049237 0.0925447433944 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048506932806 0.071462118173 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0383399250043 0.151781067708 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445310019273 0.0609392437508 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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