It is imperative that now we show care towards environment and make best of our efforts to preserve it. The very existence of human race is dependent on it and therefore I agree that we should come up with some initiatives to protect the environment which will help save our future generations from any unwanted diseases. I would like to throw some light in this essay on various factors supporting my agreement.
Environmental pollution has already cost our people a lot in terms of various deadly diseases. Many countries are even spending big amount of money on finding a cure to new found diseases. Many people have already lost their lives due to outbreak of some new virus. Some money needs to be invested in rather prevention of such epidemics which can be thought of as a full proof solution to this problem.
Government agencies in various countries are doing their bit to create awareness among people. Dissemination of public health and hygiene is done through campaigns on various subject like less consumption of fuels for car combustion, reduction in use of plastic, recycling of paper and many more. It becomes responsibility of citizens to implement such changes in their daily life too.Furthermore since it is a burning issue at a global level,countries must come together and work as one unit to combat them. There are various summit at international arena organized in different parts of the world,
many legislative acts are passed in order to save the natural resources for future generations.
I want to conclude by stating that many species are already extinct and flora and fauna is depleting every moment. With such proliferation in recent times,human race might face extinction sooner than we thought and therefore we must act now to see a better future.
- Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their wast 78
- These days free music and free films are available online. Is this is positive or a negative development, Give reason for your answer and include examples from your own experience. 56
- Nowadays the most important task is the environmental protection of our planet for future generations To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 97
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01006711409 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88748396069 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630872483221 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5416864693 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.846153846 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.30769230769 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111847352942 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348288083361 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356246861192 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0634396477199 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426569080773 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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