Nowadays the most important task is the environmental protection of our planet for future generations. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Environmental pollution has been spreading rapidly. Most importantly, to protect our nature, ecosystem would be the leading target of everyone for the well being of forthcoming era. It is true and I would agree to this statement because, the goodness we are experiencing by nature is the result of our ancestors protection towards to this habitat. Same like this generation also have the liability to take care from the pollution, in order to legislation and so on.
Soil eradication, deforestation, fossil fuels are the most important causative factors to pollute our environment. To control over such causes would be minimize the harm. Since, the negligence of that may vanish out the natural water supplies like wells, ponds, rivers as well. Moreover, global warming has been another significant changes occurring in the world by the improper management of environment. There by to keep our living atmosphere in terms of safe hands would be inevitable task for every individual. For instance, "one tree challenge" conducted in India last year to flourish everyone as to plant one tree each person has a predominant example for to make a beautiful nature for upcoming generations.
Today itself, our planet become a garbage box of excessive plastic wastes,especially on rivers and oceans, which may lead to detrimental effect on our surroundings. So that every individual must maintain proper disposal of wastage, for to prevent eradication of natural pests and species to help regenerate earth contents in normal way. Furthermore, farmers are using huge amount of pesticides to increase growths, which may also affect ecosystem. At once, government and every individual should maintain this planet properly to prevent additional damages and to protect from such harm. For example, heritage protection agency has a well developed organisation to endangered nature and for the well being.
To conclude, save the nature would be a inevitable task for every individual.That is not only for the future genes but also for the wellness of earth stability.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37230769231 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06566247172 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606153846154 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7216880306 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.125 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247160874966 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732406423905 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546290195217 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150613453516 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319277441104 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.