Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: "Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children."
In the last century, the world we live has experimented a breakthrough in different fields. Nowadays, we are fortunate to live in a technological society which is better than our ancestors. First, technological devices are present in our typical days, and it makes us our life easier. Second, our health is better because of scientific advances in the disease treatment and its cure.
First and foremost, we live in a new society with a high development technology and is very usual that day by day we use different technological devices such as mobile phone, electric kitchen, laptops, television, and so on which it makes us a more comfortable life. For instance, youth people wake up at the morning and turn on their mobile phone which is one of the essential devices in their lives, because of we can do video calls in real time with our family, friends, and coworkers in any part of the world and we can check our social networks. Then, they can make their food in an electronic kitchen and work all the day on a laptop while they watch the news on the television. In this sense, this new lifestyle is very different to our grandparents' slow life.
Another point to consider important is the significant advances in the health field in the last fifty years. For example, ill people are more likely to recover with technological treatments for diseases. Likewise, all the people can access to be vaccinated since a child to prevent diseases in the future. For that reason, the health of people is better than the last generations.
In sum, I firmly believe that the life of our grandparents, when they were a child, was complicated in comparison with our actual lives. In this sense, the technological advances play an essential role in a better lifestyle of the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...elevision, and so on which it makes us a more comfortable life. For instance, you...
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Line 3, column 404, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because we' instead.
Suggestion: because we
...f the essential devices in their lives, because of we can do video calls in real time with ou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, likewise, second, so, then, while, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81433224756 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.825830054 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521172638436 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0990475041 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.571428571 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0783018120958 0.236089414692 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0273471944627 0.076458572812 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301973919813 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0515830846679 0.150856017488 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204309723113 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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