Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Governments should focus its budgets more on environmental protection than on economic development
Nowadays, most of the governments in the world concentrate on a significant issue-should the government allocate the money to the environmental protection or the development of economy. Some people hold the view that the governments could use the budgets to develop their economy and market and then they could use the profits stemmed from the development to alter the environment. But I totally object this view and I think the governments should give the environmental problems the first priority.
First of all, we cannot neglect the reality that the environmental issue is extremely severe. Whe...
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