The two pie charts below show the marital status of Australia's and Canada's populations for 1999 and 2000 respectively.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
By: Hoang Anh
A glance at two pie charts provided reveals matrimonial status of both Australian and Canadian inhabitants for 1999 and 2000 respectively
It is clear to be seen that the number of married people made up the largest proportion in Australia in 1999 whereas the rate of residents who is single in Canada was highest. By contrast, people with same sex marriage and separated but still legally married stand at only 1% and 2% in this two countries respectively.
To be more specific, in 2000, Canada has 46% of populations who had never married, which is much larger than that of Aus...
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Sentence: Canada has no same sex married while this marital status in Australia made up 1 of the poplulations.
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