In the lecture, the professor points out a series of arguments that cast doubt on all the benefits of computerized medical records compare to paper record presented in the reading material. She states the benefits of electronic medical records that are presented in the reading passage are very uncertain.
First of all, the electronic medical records do not necessarily reduce the cost of recording as the reading states. Most of the doctors do not eliminate the hard and paper copies and keep it as documents for themselves as emergency backup so the cost does not change.
Secondly, using electronic record does not eliminate the possibility of having errors. Most of the doctors use their own pen and papar in their office and office staff fill the form at the later time which can have handwriting error.
Lastly, the professor states access to electronic record for research is not nessessarily easier than hard copies. Due to confidentiality, access to these records are restricted by privacy laws and needs lots of permissions. So if the patient blocks the access to their record no one can have access to them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 225, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...acy laws and needs lots of permissions. So if the patient blocks the access to their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 12.0772626932 25% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 22.412803532 45% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 1373.03311258 68% => OK
No of words: 187.0 270.72406181 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01604278075 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 4.04702891845 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73114959847 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 145.348785872 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561497326203 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 419.366225166 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6980351457 49.2860985944 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.222222222 110.228320801 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 21.698381199 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 7.06452816374 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.465675739102 0.272083759551 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202867800273 0.0996497079465 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102304485377 0.0662205650399 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266799320834 0.162205337803 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540028666202 0.0443174109184 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.8541721854 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 63.6247240618 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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