Essay topics: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I don’t have doubt that say true is good and the people need do this more. So that, I agree completly with the statement that always telling the truth is most important consideration in any relationship between people. Since I have three reasons involving importance, ethic and need for all people to tell true.
First, the ethic say that evertime about everthig is necessary say true. Since that is the base for our nature. When a person say true for other and for all, he will always be a good person because is important say the true. The truth is not in the simple people but in a major, a lawer, a chil. And is necessary that the people say it. For exemple, when I was a child, I saw my brother broken a glass in my house, and I don’t tould for my parents. After a time, my pirents was looking for this glass and they thought that someboy have stolen. So that, I said for my parents and they argumented with me to say the truth, because we need be honest, and my parenst said me importance to say the true.
Seconde, we need have confidece in the people, ande when we are a not truth person we don’t belive in others. Not is all, but many politicans have stolen money of society and making corruption. And much of then have conflit with ohter, because some one is honst and say the true to the person. For instance, in Brasil there are a big problem with corruption and there are conflits with ther persons how say the true and with that don’t say the truth. It’s not good for a country or a city, since that this actions have intels bad things for others.
Third, say the true is good and necessary for society and for the people. I always read things about the pscologist, because I think very interesting althought I don’t study pscology. And a day I read a pscologist journal tha was saying the importance to parents learn the children say true. Since they grew with good thinks. However, is necessary be strong and always remember them this importance.
In conlcusio, I belive and affirm that is important all people say the true. Since that we are living in a hard perild that have much liers, we are needing true people for our government and it important for the nature of the children. Therefore, all people need say the true and make the others say, because the world need of people that say true.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 669, Rule ID: SAY_TELL[2]
Message: 'Say' cannot be followed by a direct personal object. Did you mean 'told'?
Suggestion: told
...cause we need be honest, and my parenst said me importance to say the true. ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aid me importance to say the true. Seconde, we need have confidece in the p...
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Line 7, column 250, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...f then have conflit with ohter, because some one is honst and say the true to the person...
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Line 7, column 340, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'problems'?
Suggestion: problems
...For instance, in Brasil there are a big problem with corruption and there are conflits ...
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Line 7, column 517, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ood for a country or a city, since that this actions have intels bad things for othe...
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Line 9, column 298, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...to parents learn the children say true. Since they grew with good thinks. However, is...
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Line 11, column 130, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...e are living in a hard perild that have much liers, we are needing true people for o...
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Line 11, column 145, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... a hard perild that have much liers, we are needing true people for our government and it i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, look, second, so, then, therefore, third, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 33.0505617978 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 429.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49883449883 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.394764295 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.412587412587 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.9 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 14.0 3.10617977528 451% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7730489108 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.4166666667 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109276089745 0.243740707755 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452162784389 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935395582621 0.0758088955206 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954238083809 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0983172553439 0.0667264976115 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 14.1392134831 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 48.8420337079 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 12.1639044944 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.38706741573 82% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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