Write a letter to Restaurant Manager to organize a party. Include:
1) Why do you want to give a party?
2) What special arrangements you will need?
3) Ask some relevant questions?
Dear Mr Osborne,
I am writing to you to make enquiries in relation to your restaurant. I am planning to book your place for an upcoming party I will be hosting. Allow me to elaborate.
I am on a brink of a nervous breakdown due to the level of stress in relation to organizing a birthday party for my 90-year-old grandmother. Even though she insists on not having a party, but as she is in the last phase of her life. I feel a party should be hosted. However, the sole reason for hosting a party is to get everyone under one roof to meet my grandmother as she has not been doing well lately.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, i feel, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 246.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37398373984 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56801201379 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544715447154 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.0 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9893151416 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.7333333333 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240280220357 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754886809313 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560780748009 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135141209883 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475956235561 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.