The bar graph shows the sales information of different reading materials from 2002 to 2012.
As is presented in the graph, History books had highest sales when compared to other reading materials. Hobbies books had lowest sales all over the period. As years passed , sales for Art books inclined. From 2002 to 2004 sales for Entertainment books increased , after that till 2012 the sales remained constant with barely significant improvement in 2012.In 2008 history books had highest sales of about 10000 copies. Second most sales happened to Entertainment books, in 2002 it had only 4000 copies by 2012 it reached above 3000 copies.
To Recapitulate, most of the people are attracted to History books , in contrary less people are interested in hobby books.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the highest'.
Suggestion: had the highest
...s presented in the graph, History books had highest sales when compared to other reading ma...
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Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the lowest'.
Suggestion: had the lowest
... other reading materials. Hobbies books had lowest sales all over the period. As years pas...
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Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...les all over the period. As years passed , sales for Art books inclined. From 2002...
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Line 3, column 262, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... sales for Entertainment books increased , after that till 2012 the sales remained...
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Line 3, column 358, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
... barely significant improvement in 2012.In 2008 history books had highest sales of...
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Line 3, column 380, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the highest'.
Suggestion: had the highest
...provement in 2012.In 2008 history books had highest sales of about 10000 copies. Second mos...
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Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...he people are attracted to History books , in contrary less people are interested ...
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Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ttracted to History books , in contrary less people are interested in hobby books.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 639.0 965.302439024 66% => OK
No of words: 123.0 196.424390244 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19512195122 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.33024571262 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62616877003 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626016260163 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 179.1 283.868780488 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.2314316191 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2857142857 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.42857142857 5.23603664747 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221242223832 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123678016557 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122464611263 0.0843802449381 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189651439857 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.165078486517 0.0819641961636 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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