When we look to both pictured graph of given information about travel to and from the UK. More else most popular countries for UK residents to visit.In the graph reported tourists in UK and residents of UK in abroad steep rising as years go on.
In the first line graph visits to and from the UK by tourists who were longing to go abroad between period of 1979-1999. However, visits to UK by overseas students are rising not much than visits abroad by UK residents from 1979 to 1984, which growth was 10 to 20 mln.But, later on both types of tourists are harshly increasing to the top high summit by 20 mln to over 50 mln and by 11 to over 20 mln respectively.The number in the first curve surpasses the second.
Having a look at the second graph, most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999 was a one of touristic country known as France range to 10mln. Then coming down to Spain by few mln lesser. The least known countries are USA, Greece and Turkey.
Finally, the UK visitors in abroad folowing of trend is more upward going than of another line to UK.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, look, second, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5099009901 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6511599635 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549504950495 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.302399914 43.030603864 233% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 130.142857143 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8571428571 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332874211959 0.215688989381 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149888368995 0.103423049105 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132505341007 0.0843802449381 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213958958026 0.15604864568 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125037646901 0.0819641961636 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.47 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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