Dear sir or madam,
I am writing to you to highlight the commendable services which I had received from one of your employees. Allow me to elaborate.
I am a frequent traveller from the JFK Airport and as such on 02 June 2018, I was flying out of the city to San Francisco for a business trip. I was running a little late for check-in and in the heat of the moment I forgot my driver’s license in the security check bucket. However, I did not realize that until I had boarded the aircraft. Further, I intimated the Airline staffs who were not much of a help.
Further, an employee of the airport Mr Devon Smith was standing and overheard me begging the airline team to allow me to make my way back to the security check area. However, Mr Smith inquired the departure and last boarding time and immediately rushed from the spot. Moreover, he returned back to the boarding gate in a fraction of seconds. I was stunned by the commendable display of customer service by Mr Smith. I thanked him and asked for his phone number to which he politely denied stating against professional ethics.
Furthermore, I would like you to encourage Mr Smith to keep doing great work. However, the act of going an extra mile has made me a fan of the airport. I will always prefer flying out of this lovely airport.
Yours faithfully,
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 282, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returned'.
Suggestion: returned
...tely rushed from the spot. Moreover, he returned back to the boarding gate in a fraction of s...
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Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is lovely airport. Yours faithfully, Brad Jason
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, moreover, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 242.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57438016529 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63507118764 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599173553719 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7520090338 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1333333333 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184692952172 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512286203066 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649377589453 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126043570724 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717332294154 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.