DEAR IGOR,
I hope the letter reaches you in the best of health. I was elated to have received your letter asking for my opinion. Allow me to elaborate.
At the first place, I would like to congratulate you on your graduation. Further, you have reached that stage in life where it feels like you are stuck between a rock and a hard surface. As far as, I have known you I feel that you should not attend university. Firstly, the amount involved for obtaining education in university is exorbitant. Secondly, I feel that you would not enjoy being a monotonous thing to do.
Moreover, I feel that it will be appropriate for you to take up a white collar job which will support you and your family at the time of need. During this disastrous financial struggle that your family is going through I would only suggest you to add every single penny possible. However, I know it will only be a drop in the ocean, but trust me your family needs it. Moreover, you have excellent credentials to land you a decent job.
Furthermore, I feel that with your outgoing personality and your hobby of traveling would make you a perfect candidate for a career in airline industry. I encourage you to apply for the same. I am sure in longer run you will you appreciate my advice.
Best Wishes,
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 14, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...advice. Best Wishes, Brad Jason
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 50.0 32.9175257732 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1073.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58547008547 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57554781803 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58547008547 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 338.4 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7909029232 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0625 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.625 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253635795518 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885475408772 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490360897942 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166797482061 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0122531221507 0.0580467560999 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.75 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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