Many students in search of better educational opportunities often head out to universities which are located far away from home. There are some who assert with the same and some who think it is wrong practice. The essay will deal with both the sides.
In pursuit of education, the pupils are willing to go through a lot of sufferings. Undoubtedly, the students staying with parents will have many advantages which one would not be available at university. There is nothing like home. One would not have to do the basic chores at home and further, it would be very economical to stay in the house. One would save a lot of money on accommodation, food and other ancillary expenses. For instance, one would spend money on renting a dormitory which is expensive in universities. The person would only have to spend some money on transportation and apart from that there will be no other expenses.
On the other side, living away from parents can be a costly affair which not many can afford. But, it is said nothing in life comes without paying a price. Thus, in the time when one needs to mingle with other people and broaden their horizons it should not be expected from them to seclude from their own society and lead a nomad life. Furthermore, the experience of staying away from house and being independent cannot be substituted by any other experience.
In conclusion, in my opinion, staying at a university will undoubtedly be an expensive affair. But, there are many benefits one receives by staying away from parents in a university such as library, meeting with students from a range of societies and learning about their culture etc. The said learning can never be possible if one lives with their parents. It is said that everything great in life comes with a price.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, thus, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77993527508 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66235866556 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511326860841 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0639368982 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0555555556 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27777777778 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242610976364 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758378691398 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641210581043 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152271926705 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357100273835 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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