To understand the most important characteristics of a society , one must study its major cities.
Man is a social being. Society is a place where he dwells and builds relationship with various parameters contained in it. Not only leading a life, but by his inquisitive nature , he has various reasons to understand the important characteristics of a society. This makes a man more complete and sophisticated in his ideas and builds a better understanding with the social forces of the community. Understanding important characteristics of the society can be done in various process like studying the history of a religion , the lineage of his ancestors, the architecture around and so on. Thus I...
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thanks a lot for your
thanks a lot for your valuable comments. please give me some more suggestions to improve my essay better
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No flaws found for his essay and it can reach Score: 5.5 or 6.0 out of 6.
We were just wondering why you did very well for this essay but not that much great for TOEFL essays? TOEFL essays should be easier to develop.
Thank you.I will try my level
Thank you.I will try my level best in TOEFL essays too.
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Score: 5.0 out of 6
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 25 15
No. of Words: 476 350
No. of Characters: 2352 1500
No. of Different Words: 234 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.671 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.941 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.932 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 179 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 134 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 86 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 53 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.04 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.373 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.276 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.482 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.103 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5