The space travel is fantastic these days and they are very fascinated towards it but there many environmental problems on our planet which should be resolved first rather than spending a lot of money on space travel. What is your opinion?
It is irrefutable to say that from some decades space traveling has become a competitive trend among all countries. Space travel helps the human being to explore more about the universe. There are some people who support the space traveling but some have opposite opinion.I am inclined to believe that Space traveling is need of our modern world but current environmental problems on our planet should also be focused upon.
First of all, Space traveling helps the human being to know more about the universe and many also helps to find many unanswered questions and theories about the creation of universe. With the help of space traveling people are also become able to predict about some climate problems in advance such as cyclones, volcano's blasts and many more. It also make very simple and fast procedures of communication with the help of satellites. It is also being done for medical purposes. For instance, space mining helps the astronauts to find that matters or materials which can be used to cure diseases which are still non-curable for us.
On the other hand, Space traveling also leads to some environmental problems. All nations should spend more money on their environmental problems and basic needs rather than spending much higher amount of expenditure space traveling. However, space traveling should be done only for proper reasonable purposes such as for communications, climate predictions rather than being part of competition. For instance, Some countries have successfully launched their space missions with high amount of expenditure but still they have lack of some basic needs such as proper education, hospitals and many more.
To recapitulate, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that Nations should spend more money on their basic needs and in significant space programs. Governments should give priority to current environmental problems as earth is our current life-supporting planet and therefor should make it save for future instead of finding new planets for living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, still, as for, for instance, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1207.87684729 141% => OK
No of words: 320.0 242.827586207 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30625 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77350748151 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 534.6 379.143842365 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4336799252 50.4703680194 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.285714286 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366166856958 0.242375264174 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139837199514 0.0925447433944 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718073592955 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23700876916 0.151781067708 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605917704018 0.0609392437508 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.