63)Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. Use reasons and specific examples to support our answer.
Life is the greatest teacher of all, it teaches us things that no one else could. Life is full of surprises, but it is always full of lessons if your willing to learn from it. The magical thing about experience in life is you learn something new everyday. With every failures and heartbreak you experience, there is a lesson to be learnt from it. I agree that most experiences in our lives that seems difficult at that time becomes valuable lessons for the future.
First of all, experiences teach us to not to do the same mistakes that we had done in past. Once a mistake is done it is impossible to make it right, but the only one way is not to repeat it in future. We all agree that the part of achieving personal mystery is to transform mistakes, failures and setbacks into learning opportunities that will make us strong for the future. Mistakes are great, because we always can't learn from our success. Most of them don't realize is that they learn from their negative experience, if the identify it at the right time or-else mistake will be again repeated.
In addition, even with experiences some people become overconfident and that they experience it when they overcome the hardship. By knowing the mistake done in the past some people don't care and become more confident and repeat the same thing over and over. For instance, when i went third time to give my driving test, i did the same mistakes in the past because i was overconfident that i'l sure get the licence today. Even-though, i had learnt will practicing but failed to apply in actual test. So always there will be small things and also big things to learn in life, we should not forget to learn from small or silly mistakes.
Furthermore, difficult experiences in life makes us strong in the future. Because we have already experienced it before and we will have some idea to handle the toughest difficulties in future. Most of the people refuse to correct their mistakes and develop a egoist nature, where there is 95% of repeating same mistakes. But the person correcting from mistakes is the hero, failure doesn't make us weak, in-fact, it helps to understand the reason behind the failure better.
In conclusion, life is short but at the same time it's one of the longest events you will ever have to ensure. Experience is always be our teacher, which makes us strong, focused to not to repeat same mistakes, self-confidence and many things. If you think deeper every moment of pain, suffering or happiness will always leave you something to learn.
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Sentence: Experience is always be our teacher, which makes us strong, focused to not to repeat same mistakes, self-confidence and many things.
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