The given vertical representation illustrate about the UK call which had been categories into three section from this year of 1995 to2002 . It is Caleb rated in billion minutes
It can be seen that 70billion minutes were spent by UK citizen in the year of 1995 where as 40 milion minutes and 50 billion minutes were spent by UK citizen in the year 1995 on the international or mobile call .A part from this in year 1996 UK people had used 80 billion minutes for local call Moreover they had used 40 billion minutes on national and international call and used 7billion minutes on mobile calls .In the following year 85 billion minutes were being consumed on local calls by the UK people however 45 billion minutes were being consumed by the UK citizen on national and international calls further 8billion minutes were being consumed by the citizen of UK .In the next year 1998.90 billion minutes were taking by the UK citizen on the local calls but 50 billion minutes and 10 billions minutes were taken by the UK citizen on the international and mobile calls respectively
As per as trend was concerned in addition to this 90million minutes were spent by the UK citizen in the year of 1999 moreover the 50 billion minutes and 25bilion minutes were spent by the UK People in the year of 1999 on the international and mobile calls .A part from this ,In year 2000 UK people had used 85billion minutes for local calls Moreover they had used 55 billion minute on national and international calls and they had used 25 billion minutes on mobile calls .In the following year 75 billion minutes were being consumed on the local calls by the UK people however 60billion minutes Were being consumed on the national and international calls by the UK citizen .In the year 2002 80billion minutes were being consumed by the citizen of UK on the local calls further 60 billion minutes were being consumed on the nation and international calls by the people of the UK and 45 billion minutes were taking by the UK citizen on the local calls
It is evident that in year 1990 the maximum billion minutes were being consumed by the UK people on the local calls and minimum billion minutes had used by the UK people on mobile calls
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, moreover, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 7.0 400% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 33.7804878049 172% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1829.0 965.302439024 189% => OK
No of words: 394.0 196.424390244 201% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6421319797 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 3.73543355544 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46695059073 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.261421319797 0.547539520022 48% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 564.3 283.868780488 199% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 8.94146341463 22% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 197.0 22.4926829268 876% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 980.0 43.030603864 2277% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 914.5 112.824112599 811% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 197.0 22.9334400587 859% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.5 5.23603664747 334% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 1.69756097561 1944% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28952294518 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.234682878147 0.103423049105 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03224165907 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243201412109 0.15604864568 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191404916806 0.0819641961636 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 98.9 13.2329268293 747% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -111.56 61.2550243902 -182% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 77.8 10.3012195122 755% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.82 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 14.77 8.06136585366 183% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 11.4329268293 241% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 80.8 10.9970731707 735% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 11.0658536585 253% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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