some people think a person improves his intellectual skills better when doing group activities
intellectual skills are defined as the methods an individual can use to evaluate and organise information data. one of the most pressing concerns is regarding the given topic that do the intellectual skills of a person get enhanced when he is indulged in a group activity or not.i completely agree with this statement and shall explore the same from various aspects in the following paragraphs
group activities which include group discussions,debates ehance the cognitive development of a person. the first and the foremost advantage of a group activity is profound understanding of various topics which are being discussed in the group activity ; it not only triggers the horizon of knowledge but also covers all the fundamental areas of the knowledge.apart from this group activity builds connections of knowledge as ideas,opinions,views of different people get interlinked and interchanged .moreover i would say that a
group activity builds trust and motivate each other, to bolster my perspective i would say that if a debate over the topic "Are the mobile phones a boon or a curse" is conducted then many of thd advantages as well as disadvantages will be revealed out and knowledge of both the groups will be increased.
in adition to this the substantial advantage of group activity lies in the raise of the self esteem of a person. furthermore feedback helps the people to refine their understanding of a particular concept which in result improves the level of horizon of a person.
As we have seen that there are a plethora of benefits of group activities , i tend to believe that these activities offer a guided path to autonomous learning and rational thinking which can impart higher cognitive abilities . To pen down , i would say that the significance of group cognition in improving the brilliance of an individual is renowned for ages as it considers a large unit of analysis of various cognitive activities mainly problem solving.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, well, apart from, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18553459119 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22310130261 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553459119497 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 208.445754701 49.4020404114 422% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 235.571428571 106.682146367 221% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.4285714286 20.7667163134 219% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.4285714286 7.06120827912 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322295034535 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140302683806 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589167098492 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166384890397 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572638522324 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.7 13.0946893788 196% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 17.34 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 11.3001002004 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.71 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.49 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.