If I was asked to study climate, I would choose global warming as my subject of study as it is one of the preeminent issues that is encountered by the world currently and very less attention has been given to this field currently.
Global warming is the root cause of major climatic changes occurring throughout the world due to which hot areas such as deserts are becoming more hotter and cold areas are becoming even colder. For instance, Sahara desert has experienced a weather of 52 degrees in summers which used to be maximum of 40 degrees a decade ago. Adding to this, Sunderbans forests in eastern part of India has experienced 300 mm of rainfall this year which is much more than what it experienced last year which led to floods during monsoon in couple of states leading to loss of human as well as animal life. The issue is much more visible nowadays and is continuing to show its effect which is currently being ignored by the authorities. More rigorous steps should be taken by government in order to curb the root cause of climate changes across the world.
Most prominent repercussion of global warming is melting of ice caps in northern most part of earth. To illustrate, Antarctica has lost half of its ice cap in past 2 decades which led to flooding of coastal regions in many countries. Moreover, Global warming is leading to many other natural disasters namely tornadoes, cyclones and even earthquakes. Pollution is also adding to depletion of ozone layer in the earth's stratosphere which makes the earth surface even warmer as more carbon-dioxide is trapped near the surface. Using alternate fuels for automobiles can help mitigate the issue of global warming and help preserve climatic conditions in earth's atmosphere.
To conclude, Global warming might not seem as a serious issue currently but we are already seeing the outcome of our negligence and might have to bear the consequences of taking the climatic conditions lightly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'hotter' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: hotter
... hot areas such as deserts are becoming more hotter and cold areas are becoming even colder...
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Line 5, column 412, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'earths'' or 'earth's'?
Suggestion: earths'; earth's
...ding to depletion of ozone layer in the earths stratosphere which makes the earth surf...
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Line 5, column 474, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ich makes the earth surface even warmer as more carbon-dioxide is trapped near the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 31.9359605911 160% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1207.87684729 135% => OK
No of words: 332.0 242.827586207 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90963855422 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 3.92707691288 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68007302262 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 139.433497537 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575301204819 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 379.143842365 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.3938255251 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.833333333 104.977214359 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6666666667 20.9669160288 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10601971672 0.242375264174 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036723526139 0.0925447433944 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327549799861 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0588812160839 0.151781067708 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316886570915 0.0609392437508 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.1260098522 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.9458128079 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.94827586207 176% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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