Students of most institutions does have physical education courses in their curriculum which is considered as an preeminent program and ought to be included in schools. Basic physical education is necessary in order to develop students into healthy individuals and should be made a mandatory course.
Firstly, Physical education programs generally includes teaching students with basic fitness exercises. These exercises enable the students to take time of their studies and focus on their physical well-being. For instance, some physical training activities assist students in getting rid of body aches which may develop into severe joint pains later. Moreover, the students are able to release stress from their otherwise hectic schedules of learning various academic subjects. To illustrate this, as observed by most of the teachers, the students tend to focus more on studies and become much more active in class after some physical activity.
Finally, as a result of these programs, the students take up sports as hobbies which they may later pursue as career options. Additionally, students are exposed to various sports in this course during which they learn sportsmanship that acts as a foundation of grooming them into better individuals. As an illustration, some of the known sportsmen nowadays like M.S. Dhoni , Virat Kohli, Lionel Messi etc. are introduced to their respective sports during their school period only.
To conclude, physical education classes are essential to release student's stress, maintaining a healthy body and also structuring them into better individuals. Thus, these courses must be included in regular school programs.
- Nowadays families move to different countries for work Some people think it has a negative effect on children while others disagree Discuss both views and give your own opinion 72
- It is sometimes said that people should be encourage to get married before they are 30, as this is besth both for the individual and for society.Do you agree or disagree? 61
- Some countries encourage teenagers to have part-time job and see it as a good thing, while others disagree. Give your opinion and explain both views. 73
- Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries Explain the main causes and effects of this problem and suggest some possible solutions 88
- Some people argue that it is not wise for an industry to replace its experienced but old workers with new and young yet inexperienced individuals To what extent do you agree or disagree 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...their curriculum which is considered as an preeminent program and ought to be incl...
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Line 5, column 321, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...better individuals. As an illustration, some of the known sportsmen nowadays like M.S. Dhon...
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Line 5, column 373, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...known sportsmen nowadays like M.S. Dhoni , Virat Kohli, Lionel Messi etc. are intr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, may, moreover, so, thus, well, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59920634921 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76413197318 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8127457499 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.538461538 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298548708464 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113294456738 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886050122172 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203726863747 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105386142341 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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