One of your friend is recently gave interview for a new job. Write a letter to your friend giving him some advice about the interview. In your letter you should write:
• Ask some questions about the job.
• Give him some advice about the interview.
• Ask him when and where you could meet him before his interview to give him some tips.
Dear Dave,
How are you doing? I hope this letter finds you in good health and mental peace. I heard from Tracy that you appeared for an interview at American bank, which is without a doubt the best place to work.
However, I was curious to know more about job description, especially your roles and responsibilities. As well as, what are the future prospect of the role? I’m sure you must have carried your own research before applying for the position but I want to know how closely it is relatable to your previous job.
As you know, interviewee only get about an hour to impress interviewer and land a job. It is quite essential to utilize this time effectively to showcase your strong abilities and how that would be useful for their organization. I would advise to practice the whole process by yourself before appearing for real one.
Perhaps, we could discuss this in more detail in person. How about we hand out together and continue our discussion before interview? I’m completely free on Friday and Saturday afternoon. Please let me know when you want have meeting.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Best wishes,
Sandip
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 245, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'practicing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'advise' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: practicing
... for their organization. I would advise to practice the whole process by yourself before ap...
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Line 9, column 76, Rule ID: CONFUSION_OF_OUR_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'our'?
Suggestion: our
...ore detail in person. How about we hand out together and continue our discussion be...
^^^
Line 13, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r from you soon. Best wishes, Sandip
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, well, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85353535354 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6128298663 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671717171717 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1036230206 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.0666666667 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.93333333333 4.34317383033 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214325760526 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600026257932 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058568578743 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106501515233 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539891062288 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.96 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.