You want to apply for the following job.writing a letter to mr.Moore describing your prevoius experience and explaining whu you would be suitable for the job.waiter/waitress required for evening work.some experience would be neccessary.
Dear sir,
I am writing a letter to inform you that I want to apply for the job in the restaurant as a waitress. Ialteady done this type of the job in past.
I have a experience in the waitress job.i done it in ashoka restaurant. In this restaurant they give many facilities like transport, free food.The manager in this restaurant were very nice.They never shouted any one. If they can done any mistakes. They always appreciated the work.The restaurants timing was not suitable for me.I am a married woman.I have lot of responsibility to do.
Now i searching for other job. Which match to my free time.I give my hundred percent. I do hard work to prove my self.please do a favour for me for evening job.its sounds good for me.
I am waiting for your positive answer.
Thank you,
Your faithfully,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear sir, I am writing a letter to inform you that...
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...ess. Ialteady done this type of the job in past. I have a experience in the waitress j...
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...e this type of the job in past. I have a experience in the waitress job.i done i...
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...ny facilities like transport, free food.The manager in this restaurant were very ni...
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...nager in this restaurant were very nice.They never shouted any one. If they can done...
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...urant were very nice.They never shouted any one. If they can done any mistakes. They al...
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...e very nice.They never shouted any one. If they can done any mistakes. They always...
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...They never shouted any one. If they can done any mistakes. They always appreciated ...
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...ne any mistakes. They always appreciated the work.The restaurants timing was not ...
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...akes. They always appreciated the work.The restaurants timing was not suitable for...
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...taurants timing was not suitable for me.I am a married woman.I have lot of respon...
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...ot suitable for me.I am a married woman.I have lot of responsibility to do. Now ...
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... have lot of responsibility to do. Now i searching for other job. Which match to...
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... to do. Now i searching for other job. Which match to my free time.I give my hundred...
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... other job. Which match to my free time.I give my hundred percent. I do hard work...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...or evening job.its sounds good for me. I am waiting for your positive answer. T...
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...ng for your positive answer. Thank you, Your faithfully,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 663.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 143.0 206.0 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63636363636 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75520925752 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664335664336 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0072799673 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.2727272727 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.545454545455 4.34317383033 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 2.54639175258 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294090820554 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120315223641 0.0766984524023 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931375982522 0.0603063233224 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190746153531 0.12726935374 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680214109507 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.74 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.