The bar chart below shows the results of the survey conducted by personal department at a major company. The survey was the carried out on two groups of workers.those aged from 18 to 30 and those aged 45 to 60 and shows the factor affecting their work performance?
NThe given layout depicts the information about survey conducted. By a major company.The 10 factors affecting on their work performance in 2 age groups. The data is calibrated in percentum.which is clearly and coherently represented.
It, can be seen that. The first factor of their work performance is team spirit, in that fector each affects of 18-30 and 45-60 age groups worker with 60% affects on work performance, apart from all this factor of chance for personal development in that fector has been increased young age group as compare to 45-60 age workers with highest affects on work performance, so there for 18-30 age group have more chance for improve personal development, furthermore in age group of 45-60 affects on worker performance in factors of relaxed ki environment, competent boss and job security has been 32%,42% and 20% respectively.
As far as trend is concerned that, fector of respect from colleagues in that fector worker of 45-60 age group has increased as to compare young group worker 45-60 is 52% however age group of 18- 30 is 42% affects on worker performance, In addition to all this factor of promotion prospects is second highest worker performance of 18-30 age group with 80%, moreover, 45-60 age group has been 50% worker performance. however,the factors affects of 18-30 age group worker performance of job Satisfaction, work environment while money has been 50%, 30% retherthan 70% respectively.
Overall, it is evident that the age group of 18-30 years workers mostly increased as campare to 45-60 age group workers.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-06-26 | Bhinder deep | 67 | view |
| 2018-06-26 | Bhinder deep | 56 | view |
- Many countries women no longer the need to get married. Some believe that this is Because women are able to earn their own income and there for do not require financial security. That marriage can. Bring to what extend do u agree? 78
- The bar chart below shows the results of the survey conducted by personal department at a major company. The survey was the carried out on two groups of workers.those aged from 18 to 30 and those aged 45 to 60 and shows the factor affecting their work pe 67
- The bar chart below shows the results of the survey conducted by personal department at a major company. The survey was the carried out on two groups of workers.those aged from 18 to 30 and those aged 45 to 60 and shows the factor affecting their work pe 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ut survey conducted. By a major company.The 10 factors affecting on their work perf...
^^^
Line 2, column 328, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the highest'.
Suggestion: with the highest
...e group as compare to 45-60 age workers with highest affects on work performance, so there f...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 524, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...affects on worker performance in factors of relaxed ki environment, competent bos...
^^
Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
... group has been 50% worker performance. however,the factors affects of 18-30 age group ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 422, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...has been 50% worker performance. however,the factors affects of 18-30 age group work...
^^^^
Line 3, column 468, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...actors affects of 18-30 age group worker performance of job Satisfaction, work en...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, moreover, second, so, while, apart from, as to, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 3.97073170732 428% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 965.302439024 135% => OK
No of words: 255.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12549019608 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91402896052 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482352941176 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 370.8 283.868780488 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 190.956637748 43.030603864 444% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 163.375 112.824112599 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.875 22.9334400587 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.125 5.23603664747 232% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353433943078 0.215688989381 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15980848473 0.103423049105 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114458120499 0.0843802449381 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248745473535 0.15604864568 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398596903193 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.2329268293 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.