Friends in general occupy a tremendous part of our life more than family members. This is inevitable. Often times, people believe that keeping both new and old friends is crucial, but based on my perspective, I prefer to keep old friends. For three reasons i support this claim which are: more equipped about information concerning their friend, relate to old memories and bring to reminder about my personality.
First of all, the idea of keeping new friends is awesome as it is better to have one medium of contact with old friends. Most times, know your strength and weakness
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...ring to reminder about my personality. First of all, the idea of keeping new fr...
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...t times, know your strength and weakness
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, in general, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 43.0788530466 26% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 52.1666666667 27% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 481.0 1977.66487455 24% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 99.0 407.700716846 24% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85858585859 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.15434214553 4.48103885553 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5414029002 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 212.727598566 35% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.747474747475 0.524837075471 142% => OK
syllable_count: 144.9 618.680645161 23% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.3312499593 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1666666667 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250966521579 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100667545229 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568540701661 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190062160755 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00066144145816 0.0645574589148 1% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 86.8835125448 26% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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