Dear Hansse ,
It’s like a year since last met you in Commenwelth games. I was surprised when I hear about your travel plan to my beautiful country.
In the end of October and even November we are in uatumm season. As I know you wouldn’t like the snow and cold wether, I highly recommend you to visit the Kish island , which is located in very Southeast of Iran. You can enjoy for hot sandy and peaceful beaches as well as many tourist attractions.
I think you won’t need to any especial clothes except a pair of sandals, swimming shorts, couples of t-shirts. However in case you need something, there is lots of shopping centres with so many options.
As long as you give me your flying time , I will fix my plan to join you there in same day. I promise you won’t regret simply because I had been there last year and I found it very relaxing.
Take care and write me back when it is convenient for you.
With lots of love and best wishes.
Iman
08.06.2018
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Dear Hansse , It's like a year since last met...
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Line 4, column 172, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y recommend you to visit the Kish island , which is located in very Southeast of I...
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Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
..., swimming shorts, couples of t-shirts. However in case you need something, there is lo...
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Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[3]
Message: Did you mean 'there are lots'?
Suggestion: there are lots
...ts. However in case you need something, there is lots of shopping centres with so many option...
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Line 6, column 24, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: you're; you are
...o many options. As long as you give me your flying time , I will fix my plan to joi...
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Line 6, column 40, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... As long as you give me your flying time , I will fix my plan to join you there in...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53072625698 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47909384484 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664804469274 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3781059203 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7272727273 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2727272727 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193283985097 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612924309469 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062548455642 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931755209872 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490640378385 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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