It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be.
Give some reasons why this change has happened could be brought closer together.
Include any relevant example from your experiencr.
Family play an important role in the life of every person. Without the family, person cannot enjoy our life. Relation between family member impact on life of each member.
I agree with the statement, in modern era, life is very difficult and quick. Every person do not have enough time to be spend with their family members. They donot give preference to family member, with that, problem is facing by every family member. One of the major causes of this problem is modern technology, it's mean every member of family have a smartphone. Therefore they spend ample of time on smartphone instead of take part in family discussion, It is major causes of difficulties in family member.
The solution of this problem is not very difficult. Every member give time to family member for discussion problem and share our feeling with each other. In leisure time, member of family spend their more time with our family members. Therefore, It is very necessary to make proper bond between family member as well as when we are in family switch off or silent mode will be turn ON. As well as, spend one holiday with family by goes to picnic on weekend. In our busy life 1-2 hour should be necessary to spend with a family member. Lack of culture responsibility as well as knowledge about our culture is also main problem.
In the epilogue, Family is the dedicate indensible and dedicate of every member. Family prevail, therefore human survive. So, every person make proper relation between family member for better life experience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 8, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'plays'.
Suggestion: plays
Family play an important role in the life of every ...
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Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ery member of family have a smartphone. Therefore they spend ample of time on smartphone ...
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Line 7, column 28, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... problem. In the epilogue, Family is the dedicate indensible and dedicate of every member...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85440613027 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38804610487 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486590038314 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.847406114 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.3888888889 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27777777778 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103743599858 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446279579363 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297104898104 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0703475419829 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292543007242 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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