Now a days people throw away old things and adopt new. Do the disadvantages of throw away society outweigh any possible economic advantages.
The increasing pace of our lives and geometric increase in the IC technology that causes people to buy new products and shun the old ones, is a growing concern for governments all around the world.
Some people say that it is wrong thing to do. They mention that throw away society has disadvantages such as: (a) additional resources are used to make newer, better products but the decomposition of the old ones take long lengths of time. These materials are plastic - present in our mobile phones, rubber - from rubber tyres and tubes and some chemicals as well.
(b) a pace has been set in our society which demands for more. The demand is not about the basic needs but about the commodities. This useless demand has caused increased use of machinery which creates pollution of all sorts and not to mention, wastes electricity. The use of natural resources above threshold levels can, and is destroying multiple habitats. For instance, the great coral reef is now in endangered list, brown sparrows are now almost extinct and so does bald eagles.
Now, some people are too optimistic that they narrate only the advantages of throw away society such as: (a) society moves forward in every field.
(b) advancement in technology has enabled us to find more cures for diseases. For example, we have strong anti-biotics and a recent breakthrough in nanotechnology has given us the ability to kill cancer cells.
(c) machines has made our work safer and quicker resulting in lower mortality rate.
(d) there is an increase in economic and personal growth in population which is clear from the fact that, when people came to know about ozone hole they replaced CFCs with HCFCs to prevent it. According to recent graphical images caught in UV spectrum, ozone hole has sealed.
To sum up all, we can say that instead of creating a rift based on advantages and disadvantages, people should follow "3-R rule", which is: reduce, reuse, recycle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 111, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...away society has disadvantages such as: a additional resources are used to make n...
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Line 2, column 124, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'resource'?
Suggestion: resource
...has disadvantages such as: a additional resources are used to make newer, better products...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: B
...and tubes and some chemicals as well. b a pace has been set in our society whic...
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Line 3, column 372, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...troying multiple habitats. For instance, the great coral reef is now in endangere...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: B
...society moves forward in every field. b advancement in technology has enabled u...
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Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd more cures for diseases. For example, we have strong anti-biotics and a recent...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: C
... us the ability to kill cancer cells. c machines has made our work safer and qu...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: D
...er resulting in lower mortality rate. d there is an increase in economic and pe...
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Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the fact that, when people came to know about ozone hole they replaced CFCs with...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90853658537 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66126174015 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631097560976 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4986710514 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.625 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183489261891 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500461199394 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733043942997 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0736225030821 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0837649550546 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.