In many countries women no longer feel to get married. Some people believe that this is because women are able to earn their own income and donot require security that man can bring. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
'' I firmly believe in marriage. It's a real important decision that takes a lot of dedication and time.'' Seth Green, American actor. So, one of the most pressing concerns is that should modern women need to get married or not? As, I disagree with the given statement. Through this, I would keep my opinion.
To begin, this topic is not only related to you life but also to the other person life. The Lord God said, “it is not good for man to be alone” then He made the woman. God, the creator of the universe said aloneness was not good then He instituted marriage. Companionship makes life better. Research had proven that marriage makes people live longer. As, person doesn't have to go through the highs, lows and in-betweens of life alone. Because, God has created someone you can go through these things with. Marriage strengthens person's emotions.
So, another important concern for this is human emotions. The limbic system of brain that controls the emotions of person is different for men and women. Therefore, women feel more emotions and pain. Marriage strengthens women's emotions and makes the brain easy: Cardiff University School of Medicine Studies, shows in marriage, women have reduced the risk of anxiety, depression and other mental health challenges - more than unmarried women. Apart from this, marriage makes persons grow up really fast. Person get matured and, have another human being apart from himself to deal with. The growing up lessons learned in marriage can be well applied to other areas of life. Also, many studies show the negative effect of children raised without a father, or being single parent. It is not like that single parents cannot raise good and successful children, but being married increase the chances of doing so.
In the end, I would say that marriage is a beautiful gift. Marriages are made in Heaven, and we have to keep them intact here, on Earth. It only wants commitment and understanding
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, then, therefore, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95426829268 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44199908687 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606707317073 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.7089647555 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.0 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.12 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133912009512 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345610515959 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334291740371 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0687920089534 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450143363192 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.54 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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