You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.
Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Sam,
I intend to write this letter to you to show my interest in participating into forth coming seminar about good communication. I had called your company's support team yesterday to inquire about it & they directed me to write to you for further details.
I am working in a multinational company, whereby i am required to be well equiped with good communication to handle day to day interactions. This seminar seems to be providing me guidance in this regard.
Since this seminar is going to be london so i have to travel from UAE earlier. I request you to share the exact scheduel of seminar. The dates, venue, accommodation facilities (if provided by your company) & last but not the least, the cost that i have to bear.
I shall like to make prior payment & be done with other arrangements to solely focus on seminar agenda. looking forward to your outright response.
Yours sincerely,
Mark
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sam, I intend to write this letter to you to ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... to write to you for further details. I am working in a multinational company, ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ing in a multinational company, whereby i am required to be well equiped with goo...
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Line 6, column 105, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Looking
...ents to solely focus on seminar agenda. looking forward to your outright response. Yo...
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Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur outright response. Yours sincerely, Mark
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 751.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84516129032 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88735953024 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690322580645 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8324625757 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198659240629 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070193293403 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491643889347 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110630828684 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036740335616 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.