More and more people work from home and study from home with the development of computer technology. Do you think it is positive or negative
It is universally acknowledged that, in contemporary era telecommuting and distance education have become ubiquitous as compared to bygone era. Undoubtedly, it has become the matter of discussion weather this breakthrough is fruitful or not for society?However, I personally believe that it's demerits outweigh it's merits and I intend to support my view in subsequent paragraphs.
To embark upon, undoubtedly, computer technology has gained momentum among the masses, however it has to be made people's life sedentry. Firstly, umpteen of employees and pupils have become slackers, they procastinate their work without any suitable reason during work and study at home. Secondly, online education system is unable to recognize the calibre of any student, hence it does not provide adequate education to students, consequently many children deprive from appropriate qualification. On the other hand the telecommuters also failed to promote their products without meeting with customers, because it's easy to understand something by face to face meeting.
Furthermore, along with suitable study, colleges and educational institutes teach tutees not only good communication skills, but also persuade them to retain co-operative behaviour. So,the same with different companies, they hold distinct training session regarding communication and tactics for run business, hence many employees and pupils deprive from it. Apart from that, ample people feel monotonous during working and study without suitable ambience. It is quite imperative to adequate environment for working and study.
To approach it from another angle, some people believe that it is beneficial development. Firstly, it helps to maintain environment clean. For instance, people do not need to travel to reach thier offices and educational institutes which reduce the using of public and private transports. Secondly, people can easily spend much time with thier family and they can enhance the family bonds by present with thier sorrows and happiness.
To recapitulate, I pen down by saying that, study and work at home is detrimental development for the success of everyone.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-03-16 | Jagdeep kaur | 73 | view |
- Nowadays the way of people interact with each other has become changed because of technology. In what way has technology affected the types of relationship that people make? Has this been a positive or a negative development? 84
- Scientists predict in the near future cars will be driven by computers, not people. Why? Do you think it is a positive or negative development? 78
- More and more people work from home and study from home with the development of computer technology. Do you think it is positive or negative 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 36, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
It is universally acknowledged that,in this contemporary era telecommuting and...
^^^
Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Undoubtedly
...me ubiquitous as compared to bygone era.Undoubtedly,it has become the matter of discussion ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...us as compared to bygone era.Undoubtedly,it has become the matter of discussion wea...
^^^
Line 1, column 256, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...kthrough is fruitful or not for society?However,I personally believe that its demerits ...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 263, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...h is fruitful or not for society?However,I personally believe that its demerits ou...
^^
Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , undoubtedly
...subsequent paragraphs. To embark upon,undoubtedly,computer technology has gained movement...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , however
...y has gained movementum among the masses,however it has to be made peoples life sedentry...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Firstly
...it has to be made peoples life sedentry.Firstly,umpteen of employees and pupiles have b...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , umpteen
...to be made peoples life sedentry.Firstly,umpteen of employees and pupiles have become sl...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...ployees and pupiles have become slackers,they procastinate their work without any sui...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Secondly
...le reason during work and study at home.Secondly, online education system unable to reco...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , hence
... to recognize the calibre of any student,hence it doesnt provide adequate education to...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ize the calibre of any student,hence it doesnt provide adequate education to students,...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 419, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , consequently
...t provide adequate education to students,consequently many children deprive from appropriate...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 432, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...quate education to students,consequently many children deprive from appropriate q...
^^
Line 3, column 487, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
... deprive from appropriate qualification.On the other hand the telecommuters also f...
^^
Line 3, column 591, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , because
... products without meeting with customers,because its easy to understand something by fac...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , along
... by face to face meeting. Furthermore,along with suitable study,every college and e...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , every
... Furthermore,along with suitable study,every college and educational institutes teac...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 182, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...e them to retain co-operative behaviour.So,the same with different companies,they ...
^^
Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...them to retain co-operative behaviour.So,the same with different companies,they hold...
^^^^
Line 5, column 218, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...our.So,the same with different companies,they hold distinct training session regardin...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 307, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , hence
...mmunication and tactics for run business,hence many employees and pupiles deprive fro...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 340, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...usiness,hence many employees and pupiles deprive from it.Apart from that,ample pe...
^^
Line 5, column 358, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Apart
... employees and pupiles deprive from it.Apart from that,ample people feel monotonous ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 373, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ample
...pupiles deprive from it.Apart from that,ample people feel monotonous during working a...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 454, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...ing and study without suitable ambience.It is quite imperative to adequate environ...
^^
Line 7, column 34, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , some
...dy. To approach it from another angle,some people believe that it is beneficial de...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 89, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Firstly
...lieve that it is beneficial development.Firstly,it help to maintain environment clean.F...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 96, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...hat it is beneficial development.Firstly,it help to maintain environment clean.For ...
^^^
Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...it is beneficial development.Firstly,it help to maintain environment clean.For insta...
^^^^
Line 7, column 135, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...y,it help to maintain environment clean.For instance people do not need to travel t...
^^^
Line 7, column 191, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ple do not need to travel to reach thier offices and educational institutes which...
^^
Line 7, column 284, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Secondly
... using of public and private transports.Secondly,people can easily spend much time with ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 292, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people
...f public and private transports.Secondly,people can easily spend much time with thier f...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 385, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and they can enhance the family bonds by present with thier sorrows and happiness...
^^
Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...orrows and happiness. To recapitulate,I pen down by saying that,study and work ...
^^
Line 9, column 42, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , study
...o recapitulate,I pen down by saying that,study and work at home is detrimental develop...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 92, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... work at home is detrimental development for the success of everyone.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, as to, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1832.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.33910034602 5.12529762239 124% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.19289791851 2.80592935109 149% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643598615917 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 20.2975951904 281% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 177.32794478 49.4020404114 359% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 366.4 106.682146367 343% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.8 20.7667163134 278% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 34.0 7.06120827912 482% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 5.01903807615 777% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194593814285 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107403923215 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558688302501 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107403923215 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558688302501 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.3 13.0946893788 285% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -20.22 50.2224549098 -40% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.44779559118 259% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.2 11.3001002004 267% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 20.38 12.4159519038 164% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.09 8.58950901804 141% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 34.0 9.78957915832 347% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.1190380762 245% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 25.0 10.7795591182 232% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.