Some people think studying alone is the best way for students to have better future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Education has become increasingly popular in many countries around the word. I personally agree that studying alone is one of the good ways for students; while some people believe that other factors are equally important.
On the one hand, I agree that studying alone is necessary so that learners need to concentrate on studying better. As can be seen from this issue, students who would like to have own private space do not need distraction and disturbance from others around. Hence, ones are likely to focus comprehensive attention on studying as well as achieve better academic results at school or university. Moreover, knowledge seekers also foster personal growth due to challenging as well deal with problems by themselves, so they can improve many soft skills such as problem-solving and researching in their life. It not only enhances scores but also applies for seeking for well-paid employment and climbing up to the career ladder in the future.
Nevertheless, I believe that others are better in some cases, studying in group, for example. Firstly, students have a great of motivations when learning from others. Which means, they are approached with role models who have highly quality; therefore, thanks to partners’ tutorial, they can easily recognize their own faults and transmit knowledge. Secondly, taking in more ideas in short time from partners helps them save a considerable amount of time for getting news opinions as well as gain a huge of understanding. Finally, studying in group makes students feel satisfactory and fun, which reduces the pressure and achieve a huge success in promoting personal development.
In conclusion, while studying alone is a good choice for almost students, I do not believe that it outweighs all others.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in short, such as, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26148409894 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89058895404 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628975265018 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0392004477 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.538461538 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.5384615385 7.06120827912 206% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264823232146 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929038128201 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757584564488 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162100754333 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255051729471 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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