In this globalization era,it can be clearly seen in some nations of the world how the adolescences are being invigorated to work or to go abroad for an annually time period between finishing high school education and commencing their university study.This trend has both negative and positive impacts on their precious life.In further, both the merits and demerits of this given statement will be analyzed in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, gaining work experience is very appropriate for the young people in their future to open perfect job opportunities because practical skills give a insight to person for tackling the issues in the absence of senior colleagues.Moreover,people get a chance to earn a large sums of money for pursuing their higher studies and to manage the personal expenses related to recreational activities.A part from this,travelling to other country helps to enhance the general knowledge and adults get an experience about the other culture from the divergent parts of the world.
On the flip side,taking one year gap has several demerits .Firstly, student forget some essential knowledge about particular subjects such as mathematics and physics which is usually necessary in their university study and student can loose good study habits as well as discipline.Secondly, some problems can be faced by the pupils regard admission because the applications are not accepted by some reputed universities after a gap of high school education because during this precious time period, the pupils have to choose a particular field for their higher studies such as engineering as well as doctor.
To conclude, study is the most powerful weapon which can be used to change the world.Therefore, after completing the high school education,the students should understand the value of study and the time should be rather spent by them for searching a new universities than wasting time for travelling and work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36393442623 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21887406222 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583606557377 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 76.0 20.2975951904 374% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.321184751 49.4020404114 244% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 409.0 106.682146367 383% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 76.25 20.7667163134 367% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.75 7.06120827912 365% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24015180234 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137355258037 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0217468103204 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137355258037 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217468103204 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.9 13.0946893788 320% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -14.12 50.2224549098 -28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.1 11.3001002004 302% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.99 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.86 8.58950901804 138% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.4 10.1190380762 320% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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