you recently lost your driving license and someone sent it back to you. Write a letter to him/her.
• How important the license is to you
• Asking how he/she found it
• Saying how you would love to thank him/her
Dear Mr. Collin,
I am Gowthami, hope you remember my name. I am the one to whom you sent the lost driving license and I would really blame myself, if I don’t write this letter you.
I drive daily to my office in car and do not like risk to travel without driving license. So, I used public transport for the last two days fetching for the time to apply duplicate license, and eventually lost most of the time in my travelling in these two days. But, after receiving my license in the post that you sent, I really felt relaxed and happier, as I don’t need to go to RTA office to apply anymore and travel via public transport till I receive it.
I could barely remember that I have seen it last while showing as identity proof in a stall located in MGB center. Wondering how and where did you find my license and I kept on thinking, since I received. I whole-heartedly appreciate your helpfulness of sending my license back, as everyone nowadays are being self-concentrated. I would love to thank you by meeting and giving you a good treat in your nearby restaurants and also would definitely like to know how and where you found my license. I will be looking forward to hearing from you. Hope to see you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Gowthami
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 497, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...now how and where you found my license. I will be looking forward to hearing from...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50438596491 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65936717364 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1324698073 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5833333333 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356119117883 0.216113520407 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129067735251 0.0766984524023 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111840195042 0.0603063233224 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249469861457 0.12726935374 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120718511264 0.0580467560999 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.