Television has had a significant influence on the culture of many societies. To what extent would you say that television has positively or negatively affected the cultural development of your society?
The pervasive impact of television on society is undeniable. There are mixed views on whether it has positive or negative effects on the society and culture. I personally believe that positive effects outweighs the negative ones.
Television programs are a good way to learn other languages and get acquainted with other cultures around the world. For instance, Asians learn about American customs and traditions by watching Latin American movies. It also helps those who want to learn Spanish and Portuguese. Television programs promote cultures and lowers the expense of cultural exchange. Similarly, it brings people from different cultures and languages together and invites people to travel to the other parts of the globe.
On the negative side, countries with more wealth produce more programs and poor countries remain passive. Therefore, stronger countries assert their own culture to a broad range of people all over the world and there is no room for not developed countries to broadcast their culture or reflect their own problems in society. In addition, in countries with high religious norms, some western culture is considered obscene, such as showing betrayal, affectionate and sex themes.
All in all, I hold the view that television helps people from all around the world to get closer and make it easier to learn culture and their language but it also promotes cultural stuff. Needless to say that it strengthen wealthy, influential countries while it weakens the culture in weaker position.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, similarly, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34583333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63087635906 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570833333333 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9321599058 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6923076923 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4615384615 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241086905505 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918663849101 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659341618443 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149872131733 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356692848214 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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