Fast food is now universally in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular. Some feel that is a positive trend, while others do not. What are your opinions in this?
Fast food has seen a dramatic increase in the past five decades and you can access fast food stores in every corner of the world while people queuing for it. No need to say that fast food is considered as a junk food and it has detrimental effects on people’s health. I argue that due to the harms it causes, it affects individuals and society at large.
First of all, it is a well-known fact that excessive consume of fast foods will cause in serious health problems. Foods which are high in fat and salt are responsible for digestion system cancer, blood pressure, heart disease, obesity and so on. Although I agree that fast food is affordable and convenient, the high cost of treatment of illnesses caused by having junk foods would be significant. In other words, while fast food is delicious and beneficial in short term, it is devastating in long term.
Furthermore, this speedy lifestyle we are living with has forced us to choose the ready-made meals as the prime alternative. Most people work outside for hours and consequently have no time or energy to cook something home-made. Being convenient and low cost has convinced many people to eat fast food as the first choice; However, I would definitely have vegetables in my plate rather than unhealthy foods.
By way of conclusion, having discussed both views and the risks associated with growing popularity of fast foods, I believe we must slow down our lifestyle and promote our meals having vegetables instead.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, as for, in short, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88537549407 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70875883602 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632411067194 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0376553756 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.363636364 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171454290706 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640219563261 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452672162755 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962406870483 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452210237569 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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