You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,
• describe the situation
• explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
• say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Ensieh Parsaeian, a resident of unit 123, CE College. I am writing in the hope that you can help me with my accommodation problems which distract me from studying.
To begin with, the room is quite small to accommodate two people in comfort as there is not enough space to walk between desk and beds. In addition, since the air conditioning system is too old and noisy, it is impossible to use it during nights. Apart from that, my roommate is so inconsiderate that she frequently brings her friends to our room and party together till late. Although I have talked to her several times, nothing has changed and it seems that she does not care.
I would be grateful if you could change me a single room with a proper air conditioner so that I can put concentration on my studies and perform well.
As you will appreciate, this is an urgent matter, and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Ensieh Parsaeian
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, apart from, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63005780347 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6720337027 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.693641618497 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9783877635 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 4.34317383033 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193324914693 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671734299562 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701853650707 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126056674571 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458802747027 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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