The graph shows Underground Station Passenger Numbers in London.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and
make comparisons where relevant.
The graph indicates London Underground station passenger in a day.
Overall, two times of a day have the highest number of people using station are 7:30 am and 5:30 pm.
First of all, the number of the station passenger lowest over the course of a day at 6:00 am with just 100 passengers. After this, the numbers rise quickly to 400 at 7:30 am before drop to less than 200 at 10:00 am. Between 11:00 am and 3:00 pm the numbers rise with 300 passengers using station.
In the afternoon, the numbers sharply decline with less than 100 people using station at 4:30 pm then take off to less than 400 at 18:30 pm. After 7:00 pm, the numbers of passengers drop quickly to more than 150 passengers at 20:00 pm. Between 20:30 pm and 22:30 pm has a slightly increase of the numbers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'passenger the lowest'.
Suggestion: passenger the lowest
...First of all, the number of the station passenger lowest over the course of a day at 6:00 am wit...
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Line 4, column 270, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('slightly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('increase') instead of another adjective.
...0 pm. Between 20:30 pm and 22:30 pm has a slightly increase of the numbers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 635.0 965.302439024 66% => OK
No of words: 144.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40972222222 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26221606567 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534722222222 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 162.0 283.868780488 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.45097560976 76% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.2429424772 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.375 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 5.23603664747 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132562671131 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927935108728 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896883283416 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134471981104 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103488477519 0.0819641961636 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 95.5 61.2550243902 156% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 10.3012195122 43% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 40.7170731707 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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