Your friend is looking for a new job. Write a letter to him referring a new job. Include the following:
1) Describe the details of the job?
2) Why is it suitable for him?
3) How to apply for the job?
Dear Igor,
I hope the letter reaches you in the best of health. I was elated to have received a letter from you the other day. You never fail to surprise me. You would be delighted to know that your efforts of writing me a letter to seek reference of a job have fructified. Allow me to elaborate.
Recently, I met an old friend who has been working with an airline and informed me about the oncoming walk-in interviews which are scheduled to happen at the end of this month. You would be happy to know that the job interview will be held for the post of a Flight attendant. It will involve working in-flight and serving people food also other ancillary tasks could be assigned too.
You would be contemplating the reason for what makes me feel that the job is suitable for you. However, we have been friends for long and I know that you love to travel and a long time back you had told me you would want to work in the travel industry. This job will give you the money as well as the travel time. These two cannot co-exist at the same time.
I am sure that you would have been expecting more details about applying for the job. I will cut to the chase and reveal the procedure to apply. All you need to do is log in to the TJ Airlines website and upload your resume on their portal. Further, once you have done the same send an email to kky@tja.com with my reference.
Let me know if you require any further information from me.
Yours sincerely,
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Igor, I hope the letter reaches you in the bes...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 279, Rule ID: SEND_AN_EMAIL[1]
Message: Consider using 'email'.
Suggestion: email
...l. Further, once you have done the same send an email to kky@tja.com with my reference. L...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nformation from me. Yours sincerely, Brad Jason
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 277.0 206.0 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33935018051 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26518690043 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570397111913 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.0 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.508534385 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.7777777778 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3888888889 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174574597696 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062142477751 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083354944299 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955910600837 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541169907113 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.